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Posts Tagged: submission

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6795028/1/When_Faerieland_sunk

everything about this story is FUBAR

grammar

plot line

the fact that kass is so out of character

Submission #11

Just feeling on a killing spree… So I killed my fave npc, Parlax, by making Gorix and Cylara insane… Oh, and there’s some hintings in there…

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2188455/1/Fencet

It’s hard to explain this one… so I’ll let it’s summary do that for me:

“The story of a terribly helpless Acara, and what happens to him, when he gets abaondoned, then dopted by a very abusive owner.”

Why does concepts like this alone get into NEOPETS?

Oh yeah, female owner abuses pet Acara.

Notable Quotes:

“e felt so used..This was’nt right. He gasped slightly, as her hand slid down, and rested on the curve of his but”

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http://games.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544175534

there are two chapters,

it’s NC-17 rated,

it’s jhudora/sloth,

“‘SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT!’” is an actual line of dialogue

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4947386/11/The_Tale_of_a_Lupe_and_a_Faerie

A smutfic between the Soup Faerie and a Lupe.

It’s not badly written persay, (the smut scenes are cringable at best however) it does hold some form of grammar and spelling.

But a concept ends up PWP between the soup faerie and a lupe.

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2003185/1/KassXFyora

Written while high, apparently.

Notable Quote:

“Hn…This is just a one shot thing about that Sexy darigan eyre, kass, and Fyora..Yes, I’m high..and I wanted to type up soemtihng crazy..so..Her’es a lil romance one shto between my favorite neopet Characters..giggles ANYHOO..WARNING, SEX WITH HAPPEN IN HERE,ALRTHOUGH IT IS NOT TOO EXPLICIT!”

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2554031/1/Dont_Tease

With a summary like:

A vampiric gelert moves in with his boyfriend for some time alone but some girls in a bar make him change his ways. MM and MF, Rated for language and adult content.

you know we’re in for a treat. Not only is it beautifully written in MASSIVE WALLS OF TEXT, grammatical errors and what not, we get the oh so famous memorable quotes such as:

“Cio moaned and De looked down, and saw him with his hand down his pants, obviously masturbatin”

“Yeah… I’m gay.”

she had stuffed her pussy in his face and was now licking his erect member. Cum steadily flew from her pussy”

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3575035/1/consquences

The consequences of two similarly-named neopet having fun, apparently. Most likely a troll fic. Read the reviews for more entertainment.

Notable quotes:

“The female opened her eyes wide and moaned and screamed and enjoyed it lots”

“ashley took the distraxtion to puish the child out of her body and it shot into the waing arms of a nurse.”

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3980973/1/Dirty_Little_Secret

“nnhn…” moaned Garin as he slowly impaled himself on the gelert’s cock. 

and then part 2:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4702889/1/Im_in_Heaven

“Well-Oh Fyora Allador, do that again!” The Gelert Assassin snickered and complied.

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7627569/1/A_trip_to_Shenkuu

It’s basically just smut between Brynn and Hanso. Which isn’t bad.. save for the fact it’s

a) PWP (porn without plot) and not tagged as such

b) badly written smut

c) SMUT. OF. NEOPETS CHARACTERS.

Notable Quotes:

I rammed my cock into her, my balls creating a loud slapping noise against her ass.

A red haze formed before my vision, and I climaxed, spilling my seed into Brynn. Brynn climaxed shortly after, screaming my name for the whole boat to hear.